July

It's July

A beautiful day

the kids just play

The weather has nearly reached its pinnacle 

Night time seems so smooth and mystical

A drink served ice cold 

Thank you's are given, nice & bold

It's already hot for all that fire 

but let the story of life be told.

Reviews

[Ohhhwillow]

Maybe I have misread but do you mean to say "the weather has nearly REACHED its pinnacle"? Indeed let the story of life be told, you here intertwine innocence and experience, mirroring the cycle of life as Blake did. You for sure have some great ideas friend, perhaps just focus in on grammar and rhythm while you exercise them! Good work :)

[SteveB]

So many questions raised by the last two lines. Are we to expect a blow up between the guests? The "but" suggests a change from the lovely peaceful images leading to it. Nicely done.