July

It's July

A beautiful day

the kids just play

The weather has nearly reached its pinnacle 

Night time seems so smooth and mystical

A drink served ice cold 

Thank you's are given, nice & bold

It's already hot for all that fire 

but let the story of life be told.

Reviews

[Dana Alsamsam]

this piece started out light hearted and a great description of this hot summer.

the last two lines are very intriguing! it's already too hot for all of this heat of the fire...we keep piling more and more on...life gets thicker as we get older, but that's just the way that it goes. i think those last two lines can be interpreted in many ways and that in itself makes this an interesting read!

[Astro]

Interesting read Jason. In the line "The weather is nearly..." the verb "is reached" should be "has reached". Hope you're enjoying those cold drinks, it sure is hot.

[Rebecca Buller]

A perfect summary of this very hot, yet very enjoyable month. Thank you for sharing this:)

[Haley Harrigan]

Loved this. It was truly worth reading.

[Ronald J Chapman]

We need some thunder storms.
July's full moon is sometimes called the "Thunder Moon.' because there are lots of thunder storms in july.

[Will Neill]

Jason, you captured the essense of a hot July in your words, Nice Work.
Will

[Coyote Poetry]

July can be a hot month. Opportunity for swimming and fun can make July a very good month. Good description for the month of July. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Avinash]

I can feel the weekend in this piece.

[dw817]

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Outstanding ! And by that I mean the rhyming ! Paints a lovely story too. I'm just notta July person, more into Winter myself really, will be glad when Summer is done. :)
Slight spelling blooper, "givien[given]."

[Melanie Genevieve]

mmmm this reminds me of the freeport nautical mile where I live. in the morning there's a park nearby and theres all kids playing and eating ice cream and all but at night it's smooth and there's bars all along it at night, people drinking intensifying that heat within their bodies sometimes theres a brawl or people hollering and carrying on. lot's of good fun.