July

It's July

A beautiful day

the kids just play

The weather has nearly reached its pinnacle 

Night time seems so smooth and mystical

A drink served ice cold 

Thank you's are given, nice & bold

It's already hot for all that fire 

but let the story of life be told.

Reviews

[Hester Vane]

Simple and beautiful. It sounds like the beginning of a longer piece of writing.

[Debbie_Philly]

I really liked this piece.... and yes July... its been a hot one.. really good poem :)

[Lexi Richard]

Beautifully captures July. Very well written!

[Prritiy]

It's already hot for all that fire
but let the story of life be told.

i liked it :), nice one.

[ayosonolowo]

Wow very great
imaginative
i really like that
please keep it up

[annabellee]

Awsome description of summer. your words painted all these colourful picutres in my head. Well done :)

[ANTO]

I liked this CRZJason. It can be read in different ways but the essence of summer and of life is loud and clear throughout.

[carol burgess romance]

This is very nice...night time seems so smooth and mystical....lovely image...good write

[Cassie]

good one, but where I am in the month of July we do not serve ice cold drinks.

[Renée]

Nice thoughts of July...then the heat, and where we live in the west..fire season... nicely done !