July

It's July

A beautiful day

the kids just play

The weather has nearly reached its pinnacle 

Night time seems so smooth and mystical

A drink served ice cold 

Thank you's are given, nice & bold

It's already hot for all that fire 

but let the story of life be told.

Reviews

[Lucifer Jones]

Paints a great picture. Has a great flow and rhythm. Makes you smile and think. "but let the story of life be told." That's a great place for all poets to dwell. Loved it.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Sounds like something other than iced tea is being drunk on that patio, Jason. Are more of those playing kids waiting in the wings now?

[Sue]

It reminds me of those old fashioned films on tv about NYC in the summer.....love it!

[Aarea]

Wow, that's good. I love it when poems rhyme!!! It made me think of summer at my house.

[lee von cleef]

Now there is the question of a picture . Good.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

I enjoy reading you,simple,descriptive and straight to the point. Keep it flowing!

[Pryde Foltz]

A moment of zen. Thank you.

[Kristin Lee]

I love the last line...let the story of life be told...that is rich and has a lot of potential!

[Dye]

Very sweet read, enjoyable.

[Will]

You put me at the scene, got me to see all of it. A wonderful descriptive piece; nicely done.