Object

Look look, It's my right hand.

there's this boy I know. Was raised in the same environment as me

We lived by the word , hang out around the curb and do stuff that

at the time was oh so absurd

We would play with pokemon cards and laugh 

now is all about

how many hoes & how many cars, one have.

I mean, I'm only seventeen. I'm not caught up in the street life.

But the boy was on the yellow and ran past that green life.

He wasn't ready

For the "responsibility" a young urban kid has to go through.

After all he's just a kid. Hasn't had the time to let his mind

marinate. But the streets and the beat to his way of thinking 

are linked together as if it was the marriage.

Andddd the Priest for the marriage 

in this instance is the cororner or prosecutor

I just happen to speak my peace. Cause our brotherhood I respect but my honor 

                                      I object... 

Reviews

[Aislinn]

I find that the message that is given here is incredible. There are two teenagers who have grown up in the same place. They were friends at one point, but have fallen into different places later. I love how it emphasizes that not everything is up to childhood misfortune. Neither home situation is mentioned. It's entirely the choices of the two teens. I love this.

[Rob Funk]

you aced it bro, nice voice through the word as always.

[Jon Roggie]

Nice.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Well done and with a great message.

[Leandro Mendez]

"We would play with pokemon cards and laugh
now is all about
how many hoes & how many cars, one have."
funny, cool lines