Rain

Oh Rain Oh Rain, when will we meet again

As the drops of rain fall down on my window

As the little dots of cloudburst come trickling down on the glass

I can sleep peacefully. The drops of rain is a treaty to keeps bane from going insane

Oh my God, now I may never get a nap. Is raining cats and dogs , dogs and cats.

It's smooth drizzle is washing away my problems. The stronger the rain, the stronger the freedom.

Feels like a sprinkler of alcohol being poured on open cut. My heart is open cup flooded 

                                but

Rain represents two sides.

Rain represents two sides.

                                                                                  the bad, the ugly

                                                                                  the good, the beautiful

Clouds can represent

 a town or a town full of crowns 

   Drizzle can represent

    a simmer down situation or a stressful occupation

      Lighting can represent  

        a dark place that's near or a certain spark that's here

          Water can represent

            a taste of a purity win or a sense of a obscurity sin

 

Oh Rain Oh Rain , nice to meet you again 

Author's Note

"Oh Rain Oh Rain, when will we meet again"
- pronounce "again" as a-Gain

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

Very unique. The rhythm is very broken - but the rain doesn't have a steady rhythm and you talk about the rain changing pace so it works. I like how you talk about the rain having two sides and then from that point everything has two meanings. The display is cool, like a cup running over. Over all, very unique. Good job.

[kublakhan27]

Lots of nice wordplay in this one...well done :)

[SyberRose]

Did you mean the cup of your heart is open?...just wondering...I love the rain and reading poems of rain.
Another option for represent: A cloud can be...lightening can be ..etc...nicely done:)

[QuietlyCrash]

"Water can represent
a taste of a purity win or a sense of a obscurity sin"
I really like that line and this is a good poem. One thing that I would have to criticize is your use of the word "represent" it was used a lot. I don't know if the repetition is what you were going for but to me it was just a little overused. All in all though, good job. I look forward to reading your works in the future.

[CRZ]

Yes , represent in this piece meant balance. There's a positive and also a negative feel to this poem. Represent was the balance to symbolize " a negative plus a positive equals equilibrium " & thank you :)

[Parsimony]

Can be taken as wilful complaining or artistic wisdom donning in unison to the rain.

Sorry I was oblivious earlier. You turned my negative prose to something positive. Kudos.

[CRZ]

I'll let the reader decide.