Tell me something new

Tell me something new

tell me how your legs or phone wasn't working on my birthday

to congratulate me or get me a little cake

For God's sake, don't make an excuse 

for every time you refuse. 

To be considerate but to let that one off the hook?

I'll maybe consider it 

tell me how your mouth and mind were merely together.

How all the things , places , events and secrets I told you

just happened to slip as if your mouth was a foot and the 

banana was my secret. 

Now I know that my bond... 

you can't keep it.

But c'mon, tell me something new

tell me how you always say that you'll change your ways

hey, don't change for me. I can't make you advance.

I can only give you the belt to your pants.

don't tell me you're tired about how we feel about each other.

I know there's a other side to you, the real one, I know because I seen it.

I seen it before.

The new you, I abhor

The old you, I adore 

But c'mon , be something old 

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

wow! that was actually new and impressive.....

[stars are far]

that was really one of my favorite writtings.. i can send this to someone i used to know ... but such people are not even worth being my friend ...not more...
I liked,loved this ...well done :)

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

You know you have actually described the state of mind of a lost lover beautifully. It is very direct and yet strong..."be something old" is what most of us seek but reality is much different...

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Wow. That is all I can say. This was amazing. I love all the illustrations that you used. Perfect! And the last few lines, "The new you, I abhor, The old you, I adore" Really show the emotions and that the person is really missing who the other used to be. All in all, great poem! :)

[Al R. Arce]

Oh boy..! Love the mouth and banana thing! Like I always say, the unexpected is a thing of beauty! This was a very mature piece! It was really good. Nothing bad to say about it. Well done my friend!

[Mike Emil]

ARRGH!!!
not enough talk of sebaku
or saki!!!
HAI!!!

[Death Girl]

I really like this. I like how you show how people change and sometimes the old them was better than the new them. Nicely done

[Kleio13]

This poem seems unfinished. Well..a lot of poetry is like that. maybe you should find a new woman. It doesn't end well in these type of relationships. Trust me, I've been there. nice work

[外人 (Gaiji..]

That is interesting ! Nice poem, not so nice girl, still I understand :(