Bliss

Dimmed lights, Music Blasting. 

People screaming smoothly sounds of joy.

Pure Joy , equal. Both girl and boy.

All stress seems to go to another location

Cause at that moment, no one could hold it. 

The laughs , smile , dancing and delight.

We were all united as one for the night.

Differences seemed to not matter.

Cause matter of fact, my heart was getting fatter.

No grease though, Just peace yo.

Not to sound cliche

but 

damn that was a good day.

Reviews

[costa siwale]

Marvelous, what I'd do for such a day.

[Pyyro]

I bet it was a good day. Okay of a read, keep it up

[K. J. Corbin]

I like the feeling that this gives me. Reminds me of the one type of moment that made the nights of consistent weekend parties worth it. Way to capture.

[ChikHaley64]

I love this poem.

[Justsimplyjulia]

Im here for the party! haha cool write! I loved it, the sounds of the party and the bas of the music. Great write
-Dragon

[Coyote Poetry]

There is bliss in the listening and dancing to good music. More people the better. I like the positive energy in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Heather]

I love how you reflect happiness and how the essence of it can be found in many different places, within ourselves, from another person or even from a passion, great job!! :D

[Rob Santana]

This is how I feel when I put on my earphones and blast my music into my ears. Everything else is on pause. Fun read.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

I think your title should be--Party Bliss--just a suggestion. A good read, but a little disjointed at times for me. Maybe, that is what you intended?
The ending stanza seems to sum it all up rather soon, but in a good way.
You have caught the feelings and moods of party life or a night on the town to relief stress.
Thanks for the pleasure to read and review ~ keep writing!

[Dayran]

Everything is connected ... and then to the mind. Nice write.