Bliss

Dimmed lights, Music Blasting. 

People screaming smoothly sounds of joy.

Pure Joy , equal. Both girl and boy.

All stress seems to go to another location

Cause at that moment, no one could hold it. 

The laughs , smile , dancing and delight.

We were all united as one for the night.

Differences seemed to not matter.

Cause matter of fact, my heart was getting fatter.

No grease though, Just peace yo.

Not to sound cliche

but 

damn that was a good day.

Reviews

[Rosaria_V]

I love the energy in your words. very electric

[Bob Sherunkle]

God days gone by...more on the horizon..nice write.takes me back.

[Lourisa]

I felt the enthusiasm and energy. Days like that is worth writing about! Great work.

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Music is life. Friends are a blessing. Love how you have captured a happy moment and froze it in time

[De-personalize Yourself]

"No grease though, just peace yo."
This line made me smile. I love that you recorded your beautiful experience in the form of poetry. I hope you have many more days like this. xox

[gombeggar]

hmm...well good that it was a good day

[Angel]

We need more days like that!
Thank you for sharing yours with us...

[sweetred]

loved this, it was interesting and conveyed a carefree be happy tone to it which lifted my mood as soon as i read it. Thanks alot

[外人 (Gaiji..]

loved it, just so positive, it conveys so much happiness :)

[Ees]

Awesome! I know that feeling- everyone one there screaming towards utter joy. You described it well. The energy and the pulsing. I don't know if everybody has been able to be a part of this, but I have been lucky enough to feel this a number of times. It's magic when there is a cohesiveness to a swelling mass. You did a beautiful job of reminding me of those times.

"Differences seemed to not matter."- the phrasing in that line caught me a up a little. It's certainly not bad, but if there was one line I'd give a second thought to, it would be that one.

great job!