Bliss

Dimmed lights, Music Blasting. 

People screaming smoothly sounds of joy.

Pure Joy , equal. Both girl and boy.

All stress seems to go to another location

Cause at that moment, no one could hold it. 

The laughs , smile , dancing and delight.

We were all united as one for the night.

Differences seemed to not matter.

Cause matter of fact, my heart was getting fatter.

No grease though, Just peace yo.

Not to sound cliche

but 

damn that was a good day.

Reviews

[Mary Christabel George]

Its good for once in a while to forget all the worries of the world & to get lost in the music, to enjoy for sometime. Do the things which you like doing for life is too short to regret it later.

[Perkele.7885]

I am thinking loud! Me personally, I am looking for a quieter place. But, I can dig the scene and how it is all going down. Boys and girls, all on the same page, joy and laughter and music all around. As you say; a damn fine day, no cliche'! And a good write telling me all about it!

[ANTO]

Thanks for posting this CRZ - it transported me to a rave circa 1990 where Catholics and Protestants in Belfast danced together and hugged and laughed without judgement. It was sublime.

[topsyturvy]

Best feeling in the world, captured in this piece. :)

[Sarai Lee]

This makes me think of a concert, club or party, where the music is blasting and everyone is having a good time. There is nothing else to worry about but the heightened joy of dancing and music. Well done!

[Death Girl]

I liked this piece very much. I liked how you have the rhyme. To me this sounds like a party or something like that. Nicely done

[Kuandio]

I get the feeling of an all out party here, probably with drinking. Props for making it rhyme. My favorite line, “We were all united as one for the night.” Short as it was, I think you got your point, or the essence you intended, across

[Mike Emil]

good days
nice to get those
and you didn't have saki, eh?
amazing
HAI!!!

[EloisaWrites]

And a good day, indeed, that you translate into words. I almost hear the music. And somehow, the flow of this poem of yours felt like a rap song. Haha. But it's good. Nicely written. :)

[sivan]

nice simple honest piece. reminds me of a club scene