That One Thing

Is that one thing ...

Makes me feel alright when the sun rises

and when the night arrives. There is a dawn

in me that's never gone.

Is that one thing ...

Makes me think in a different perspective.

I put myself in the other man shoes with 

my own socks.

This mixture produces the truth.

Mind constantly growing yet heart stays with youth.

Is that one thing ...

Keeps this person

on a strive 

a spontaneous drive

For that one thing ...

Reviews

[quinfinn]

could be love, could be weed...either way, i love this . speaks to me in a language i understand. well penned! oh, i was kidding about the weed thingy......

[QuietlyCrash]

This is really good. I like your style and the repetition, it really makes the piece. But I do agree with the other comment saying it would flow a little better using "that one thing". I don't know if it's just our perspectives differing but it just sort of reads weird to me. Other than that, this is a great write thanks for sharing :)
-Riley

[Charms]

This is pretty good. I think it would be better if you started with "That one thing" instead of "Is that one thing". Just a thought.