That One Thing

Is that one thing ...

Makes me feel alright when the sun rises

and when the night arrives. There is a dawn

in me that's never gone.

Is that one thing ...

Makes me think in a different perspective.

I put myself in the other man shoes with 

my own socks.

This mixture produces the truth.

Mind constantly growing yet heart stays with youth.

Is that one thing ...

Keeps this person

on a strive 

a spontaneous drive

For that one thing ...

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

Seems that you have a plan that works for you and you are riding a wave with your name on it! Hang 10 and keep writing!

[Imara]

"I put myself in the other man shoes with /my own socks." Personally my favorite line of the piece because it expresses that ideal of thinking how the other person feels but by adding while in your own socks you are saying you are also remembering your own life and experiences. Not becoming lost in seeing it in only one way, but both.
"Mind constantly growing yet heart stays with youth." Should be with the youth unless you meant it to be that way but I don't think you did because it doesn't fit the 10 syllable style you have going for the longer lines.rt of yourself into it, hint at the source behind your drive to reach whatever goal it is that you have.

[BuffyWillowDawnAngelGil..]

Nice, but I have a random question: Is your picture from a One D thing?

[Lexi Richard]

"I put myself in the other man shoes with
my own socks."
My favorite lines and by the looks of it, a lot of other people's favorites. Beautifully written, it flows very well, and really grabs my attention.

[Prritiy]

I put myself in the other man shoes with
my own socks.
This mixture produces the truth.

very nice heartfelt write.

[Aehr]

Reminded me of the song 'One Thing' by One Direction (AVID directioner here: P)

[Clara]

I loved this,

"I put myself in the other man shoes with
my own socks."

:D

[Hester Vane]

Great rhythm and meaning that you have conveyed with a few carefully selected words!

[Astro]

Interesting rhyme scheme here J. The topic is universal too, giving thoughts to the reader about what makes us tick, what drives us, what produces truth.

[Kristin Lee]

I like the socks and shoes like, that was very creative. Is that one thing...this feels very rough to me. Should it be "Here's that one thing... that makes me" Just a suggestion.
Bust over all I really like what you're saying here. It's fresh content with a lot of soul. Great job!