Grief

The man is just killing time on that table

He is not able, to accept the reality 

Of his decisions that turned fatal 

So he's thinking of his existence quite radically

The heart was once red, full of vigor 

But the mind is a killer, it's called over thinking

So in attempt to ease the tensions, there goes

another bottle of liquor

Because you aren't you when you're hungry

but he's empty inside his soul, he needs honey

but not a lot of sugar like a snicker 

Grief is the greatest thief

of our tranquility within

But if you freeze and breathe

and let the breeze relieve all the

grieve

It will decrease and will release

... the man within

Reviews

[Sunni Davis]

Grief is a terrible process to go through and many never really survive it, just go on living a different life. Very nicely written.

[Me]

Powerful read, could feel the desperation in your words...you penned the feelings well x

[Kleio13]

good write CRZ. Clever build

[Angel]

Grief...and the way we choose to deal with it...or not deal with it...
Is one of the things that define us.
Very nice job on this one, Hun!

[Sue]

The reality of grief can be stark and painful - you captured it well here CRZ :)

[Dayran]

Hunger takes away everything even a man's resolve. An exercise that helps to overcome its rigors is indeed helpful. Your technique sounds like kriya yoga. A nice write.

[ANTO]

Grief can tear us apart if not dealt with. The worlds societies has different ways of dealing with grief but in the final analysis we all have to confront it alone and on our own terms if we are to gain closure and peace of mind.
A fine write Jason and so very full of truth. Thanks for sharing.

[Inda]

This is really good, one of the best i've read from you. Keep it up!

[ayosonolowo]

Nice writting i really like it, please keep it up..

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"You aren't you when you're hungry". Couldn't have said it much better. Haha.