Life as of now

Life itself is just abstract 

You have to leave the past but refer back 

to keep intact 

Every day you gain a few pieces 

to enhance your body , soul and thesis 

Seems like there's more downs than ups 

but it makes you the person you want to be

you can either indulge what this world offers 

or be your own coach , your own shot caller 

We learn such emotions like love & grief

Pain and love, Mud and glass.

Like the time I got hurt years back 

Oh man, there I go referring to the past  

I have to learn from the past 

but also burn away from my past

The future is always on its way 

so I won't be worried with that

I need to worry about right now 

because it won't come back 

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

"You have to leave the past but refer back
to keep intact "

This is so well thought. I love this thing about your poems. They always have this silencing lines! Wonderstruck!

[Barbara Walker]

We need to refer back to the past to remember important lessons learned so as not to repeat them and looking back on past joys gives you a chance to indulge once again, but not too much, for too long or you've lost your present. This is a very relevant poem!

[GIUSEPPE]

No question call your own shots, live in today, plan for tomorrow and forget the past you can't go there anymore. A though provoking write. I liked it a lot!
GIUSEPPE

[ayosonolowo]

Nice one sir. I really like it.

[TL Boehm]

I need to worry about right now
because it won't come back
Wise words.

[Mike Emil]

the universe is abstract
all that you are expressing
is just a dream
only saited by saki and plum wine
HAI!!!

[L.Edward]

Mighty fine write indeed. I dig that analogy, "pain and love, mud and glass." Pain clouds your view, love makes things crystal clear. Lived philosophy being thought out loud. It's the best way!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"Oh man, there I go referring to the past." This line has a touch of humor, which I like. :)

have to learn from the past
but also burn away from my past

You have lots of insightful lines here. Great thinking! ;)

[ThoughtsofShyann]

I like it it was insightful and it is true! my chapter 12n is out check out when oyou get a chance!

[Rose of many colours]

Hmm, This is reality, I don't want to face, If I could turn back time. I would change A lot of my past.. Good write though.