The shade of my shades

The shade of my shades

Protects me, where no light can invade

The shade of my shades

Lets my anger be trapped behind tinted glasses!

The shade of my shades

Where my eyes close and my pupils just lay .

The shade of my shades

Creates a alter ego. It may be colored black but it doesn’t mean it’s evil

The shade of my shades

The precious shades I got after I got paid

The shade of my shades

Where the world is dimmed down from all the chaos and I’m no longer lost .

The shade of my shades

For the world to understand my point of view is what I crave.

Reviews

[MsJewel]

There are many reasons we put on shades....not necessarily to hide, but as protection. - love the line it may be colored black but it doesn't mean it's evil. There is so much between the lines of this poem. Very creative and thought provoking.

:) Julie

[carol burgess romance]

shades, we all use them in one way or other. neat write and like how you repeat the shade of my shades

[Babe Roxx]

I enjoyed the repeating line of 'shades of my shades' such cadence was rhythmic and explosive...and I Loce my shades, as well. Nicely scribed.

[Aristede Craig Jr]

interesting personality all through this piece

[Haley Harrigan]

Loved, loved, loved it! It's simply marvelous!

[Keith]

Interesting piece, we all relate to that, we love our shades and we wear them for many reasons.

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Normally, I find people messing around with the font to call more attention to their poem rather grating on my nerves. However, you are very good at using font, text size and color to emphasize the point you are trying to make. The consistency in the repetition and the choice of font size, face and color is very telling. I also enjoy the gradual increase in font size in the even-numbered lines, for it parallels the strength of your statement and feelings.

[Akashi]

...................AWESOME.............

[Aehr]

I like the simplicity and creativity of this poem. In many ways, it is witty. I like how it is funny as well, haha.
'The precious shades I got after I got paid'
MY FAVOURITE LINE. :D
Good job :)

[sivan]

the world will only understand if you take off your shades that hide it!! nice poem though