Spring

Look at the red roses that are rising

Look its so sensitive so surprising

 

But then pollen is just potent

But pills make it impotent  

 

So no more snow, no more hail

It is time to breathe, inhale.

 

Smell the grass, see and hear the ice cream truck pass

enjoy the weather whether is slow or fast  

 

Adore this season, It will never commit treason

It comes in a certain time for a certain reason

Reviews

[Morgan Storms]

Nice poem about spring. Even though its 80 degrees in Los Angeles, I think it will be a nice spring. Thanks for sharing.

[Ally Monique]

Wonderful write! I'm happy spring is finally around the corner and this poem just pumped me up for it even more ahah
Enjoyable read, thanks for sharing :)

[wordman]

I can smell the honeysuckles and see the roses bloom

[Brook]

Beautifully written. I love the language you've used. Simply beautiful.

[Sami Khalil]

An adorable poem on spring...Pen on...:)...........................

[Jackson H. Harley]

Cleverly written, but with a simplistic feel, great depiction of spring time :)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

I completely agree with Lexi. This poem is quite a delight and I really love its simplicity and beauty. Well penned!

[Lexi Richard]

I really adore this piece. It depicts spring so perfectly and I can relate to everything you wrote.

[Imara]

"But pills make it impotent " I would suggest impotent to something else.
Haha that weather whether thing really made me smile, I loved it.
Loved the rhyme too.
I just lvoed tis whole poem honestly, cute, short about a great time of the year when things are new and fresh. Great job :)

[annabellee]

Awsome, it really made me smile thinking of the beautiful springdays that finally arrived :)