Spring

Look at the red roses that are rising

Look its so sensitive so surprising

 

But then pollen is just potent

But pills make it impotent  

 

So no more snow, no more hail

It is time to breathe, inhale.

 

Smell the grass, see and hear the ice cream truck pass

enjoy the weather whether is slow or fast  

 

Adore this season, It will never commit treason

It comes in a certain time for a certain reason

Reviews

[Donald]

That is something that we long for. It seems a long time coming. I can see it when I read you work.

[Dayran]

An ode to spring ... that springs from a heart ... freed from winter. Nice.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is lovely CRZ, welcome spring :)

[topsyturvy]

Ahhh the beauty of spring, I'm starting to see it's importance now. A start of a new season, leaving the beauty and darkness of the ice cold winter behind.
A truly beautiful write. :)

[Einstein Noodle]

your poem touches the hearts of millions here in the upper midwest for sure... all are tired of below "0" ..spring is a long time in coming and most welcome ... not sure i like the simplistic rhyming ... i do like the child like reference to the ice cream truck ... i think the first verse is the strongest ...
E.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Such an uplifting write, and something to look forward to, especially with yet another huge storm coming my way. You gave me hope with this piece!

[Anna Blackburn]

Could use a little work with rhyme, grammar, and punctuation, but all in all it is the spitting image of Spring coming at last.

[h d e rushin]

I can feel it already, that infelicitous spring pollen that makes my eyes burn and my nose swell up
as if someone placed two olives in my nostrils. But the idea conveyed and the notion of a changing
season was wonderfully written.

thanks for sharing it,
dana

[h d e rushin]

I can feel it already, that infelicitous spring pollen that makes my eyes burn and my nose swell up
as if someone placed two olives in my nostrils. But the idea conveyed and the notion of a changing
season was wonderfully written.

thanks for sharing it,
dana

[Lyn Anderson]

I like the form, structure and rhythm of this poem. Good use of rhyme and lovely word flips, I especially like the second stanza. One minor thing, seems an apostrophe was misplaced "it's so surprising":)