Spring

Look at the red roses that are rising

Look its so sensitive so surprising

 

But then pollen is just potent

But pills make it impotent  

 

So no more snow, no more hail

It is time to breathe, inhale.

 

Smell the grass, see and hear the ice cream truck pass

enjoy the weather whether is slow or fast  

 

Adore this season, It will never commit treason

It comes in a certain time for a certain reason

Reviews

[David Burke]

This is awesome, very well done

[costa siwale]

Heart warming, your words do feel like spring indeed

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this, has style but also an element of dry humour, well written

[Cryingkate]

I am coveting that Beautiful Rose, can't help myself :-)

I don't really prefer any weather or season , I just want that Rose

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Nice words for those who long for spring....

[Patricia Wedel]

The rain and snow replenish
the earth. There is an awakening
in the Spring... thus my heart will
burst with wisdom and beauty of
another garden... apple blossoms
and orange blossoms with fields of
Wild flowers for lovers trysts. Amen
truly a gorgeous introduction to
Spring.... Pat

[Penny]

Very beautiful piece. Just presents an image. The rhyming scheme is good too. The way you used weather and whether was really intelligent. I salute you for that. The last couplet is just amazing, made me ( someone who hates spring) love the season. Bravo. Thanks for sharing.

[Ruth]

It comes in time just when we think we are sinking, for some lol Beautiful x

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm hoping for the first days of spring. Still three foot of snow and ice covering my lawn. A beautiful poem for the season of Spring.
Coyote