People Open Minds

People Open Minds

A Poem by CRZ

I like open minded people.
people you can just talk to 
And not get judged or criticized
through sinners eyes

I like open minded people
conversations are never the same
atmosphere feels like a sequel
creativity they attain

Where we are aware of our differences 
where we take care of our misses and
no one disses
one another cause we are all human 
aka brothers

I like open minded people 
we rather share ideas 
help our peers 
and give advice to overcome
a certain vice and fear

I like open minded people 
cause that's when the doors of my soul
slowly opens 
I like open minded people and they like me back
well that's what I'm hoping

© 2013 CRZ


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a very raw and heart felt message. The edges are very ragged still but its got character. The beat feels like a rap beat, especially how you use, aka, instead of spelling it out. Keep up the good work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I agree and very well put in this refreshingly different topic for a poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


Interesting and well-put^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


it is frustrating that when people would suddenly attack just because our views are different from theirs. it is as if our objective views are personal attack on them. quite sad. if only people could be open-minded, perhaps, there would be a peaceful world. very relevant and well-written piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I agree. Nothing worst than to talk to someone with one view on life and matters. It is good to have long conversation and try to figure the world and other things. I like the purpose and reason for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Definitely with you on this. Open minded people make the world go around, good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


love the theme of this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great piece with a great message!

Posted 11 Years Ago


lol !!! I accidentally came back and read it again...but dude...I love this..not just the thought..but opened minded people ! It is exhilarating to exchange with someone of a different view...no agenda ..just pure sharing and all your poem encompasses ! this really should be a top poem...message is fantastic !!

Posted 11 Years Ago



"I like open minded people.
people you can just talk to
And not get judged or criticized
through sinners eyes"- This is so true loved this it started strong and honest and stayed true!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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