Curiosity

Curiosity 

this got the young boy killed.

it got that unprotected man ill.

this had gotten you to reach your full potential 

it made you realize what are lifes essential 

this made you realize that world isn't there for you

it made you think that no matter how red or how healthy your heart is 

   there is always space for ... blue

this made you tattoo it in your brain to never do it again

it got you neglecting everything negative including friends 

this got me winning millions of dollars of the lottery 

it got my attention & it was from the honest me

this got me thinking and on idle 

it got my emotions dialogue on recital 

this got the person discovering a new other side 

it has you on the passenger side , while the car asks

   "Are you ready to drive?"

this got a girl with huge whole in her heart

it got this world ruined from the start

it got this world so easy on hiding the truth 

this happens because we refused . get amused

                    and get duped! 

Now you know

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

Curiosity, they say killed the cat! Curiosity has left it's mark on me as well! I am still curious but, I pick my spots before allowing myself to get too nosy about some things that are better left alone!

[Kleio13]

This sounds like the kind of poem you can spit in a rap. i like this

[Hester Vane]

Brilliant write. Original and quirky. If you revealed that curiosity is the IT at the end it would create more suspense? But it is still a great poem anyway!

[Aristede Craig Jr]

amazing write inspirational I love it from start to finish

[Me]

powerful, thought provoking read :) x

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

This poem definitely has some potential. I can tell that it has an underlying theme of the results of facades, fronts and people trying to be something they are not in order to deceive others, or perhaps because they wish to please others. However, I'm noticing a plethora of typoes and grammatical errors severe enough to hamper understanding of the poem. A few examples:

1. this got a girl with huge whole in her heart
2. it made you realize what are lifes essential


There are also some spots where I am unsure of what exactly is meant. I definitely see potential for an amazing poem though!

[gombeggar]

some strong lines here...needs some work though

this got a girl with huge whole in her heart

it got this world ruined from the start ...gotta fix the 1st line here

[buffalosoldier96]

Curiousity is the fuel of the human mind without it we are effectively nothing. very good

[ayosonolowo]

Curiosity they call it, but absolutely a damaging word to, and some practice, too bad man, really nice writting

[Sunni Davis]

Curiousity is the thing that drives us, either to good or bad things. Nicely written!