her

Wow, I hate this girl

wait, there she go

wait, I think there's hope 

But f**k it, If she doesn't like my personality

she can get my and suck...

"It's 5:26" I replied as she asked for the time

Yeah, back to my first thought

Yeah I lied

Aw man, I love this girl

She passes by and time seems to be referred as jail time

Slow as f**k, But I don't give a f**k

I'm in solitary confinement, but for the rules of love

I'll surely bent

'em for you. I'm all by myself , me and this wall

because your presence never leaves me

even though we're at fall

My head has been abused, so so confused  

 

But when you have feelings for someone

Your thoughts get all mixed 

your brain functions in hardcore

if they was only a switch to have your 

mind and heart living in concord 

her

Reviews

[Shadey Jadey]

Cute & sweet :)

[BL]

Well set up and puts the reader straight in to it in a very direct way. I can relate to your feelings and train of thoughts that you have expressed so openly and with reality. Great write keep going.

[CRZ]

Thank you. I try to get the audience into it. Love is one confusing subject.

[BL]

Yes it is very

[Ivory]

Nice piece.. i liked the flow, reads as if you were on stage rhyming : )

[CRZ]

Thank you, & yess. All of my poems are meant for it lol :)