YOU

YOU

A Poem by CRZ

It's easier to be who you want to be.
When you forget who is around to see. 
But our egos and reputation 
is something we all care about
either on our everyday life or subconsciously 
Cause what they see in me , is part of the man
I command in me.

© 2013 CRZ


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a thinking poem ( : nice work ! Many facets to ourselves that is for sure

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a really deep poem... all that really comes to mind since it's good :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


So cuttee, and straight in point, nice written..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice insight there! Sometimes we see what we want and cant see much past that. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


People only see what they want to see through their own insight, we know who we truly are inside without others bird's eye view.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Well said. Be yourself and the ones that stick around are who truly matter.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Straight up to the point real.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Huummm. Nice one. Great! I loved it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


what they see is part of the man i command in me, this is powerful. Good one

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's been my experience that most people don't know what they want. They don't drive over paths of their own choosing, but are rather driven by psychological forces that they are totally unaware of. Few people see themselves as others see them, but if they did, they'd be astonished. We assume that others see us in ways that make us feel better about ourselves, and we only imagine that what we do to impress others makes a difference.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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