Food,mhm.

Food,mhm.

A Poem by CRZ
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There's a different type of food I'm talking about guys aha

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Eyes are low , eyes are dilated
I ate only 6 hrs ago
Yes, my mood is agitated

2 more hrs passed
Stomach is churning
Tongue is turning
The images in my head are vivid and full of horror 
Because 
The pie of pizza is burning 
My appetite wish it was
learning 

The sweetness and icy of this cake
But is time to wake 
UP 
cause I was stuck in my mind
full of craves and emptiness

I guess this is how I feel about the world and food 
I've missed.

© 2013 CRZ


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Sounds like a diet. When genetics have so much to do with body shape, size and metabolism, I am rather annoyed that science's only answer for us is: "ok, fatso, you're on a diet." What a myopic and punitive discipline for folks who are already suffering from low self-esteem, skewed body image thoughts, crippling social anxiety and the concrete feeling that it is indeed because they are BAD people. I can gain weight on 900 calories a day -- with exercise. I had gastric bypass and experienced two years of bliss as a "normal" person. But then catastrophic events caused me to turn mindlessly to my drug of choice, food. No excuses -- it is my fault. Egad, didn't mean to holler from my soapbox so much! You see, it's a GOOD poem that can get me all riled up.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Very good one here, Jason. I can definitely relate. Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well, if it is a different kind of food you are talking about--I say its time to give up the junk food, comes in a pretty packages and tastes good but you just feel like crap after. Find some delicious whole and organic food; it might not be wrapped in plastic but it can still be rich in flavour and colourful. Maybe a peach or a cherry. lol.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I feel the exact same way with the tease of food in my way. Especially when I want to eat but my body will not allow me to. Very good read good sir, I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


hahaha interesting stuff go make some bison meat and vegetables, son!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really enjoyed the poem and I like the simplicity of the words but appreciated how powerful they can be

Posted 11 Years Ago


I don't think Weight Watchers has a program for that...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sounds like a diet. When genetics have so much to do with body shape, size and metabolism, I am rather annoyed that science's only answer for us is: "ok, fatso, you're on a diet." What a myopic and punitive discipline for folks who are already suffering from low self-esteem, skewed body image thoughts, crippling social anxiety and the concrete feeling that it is indeed because they are BAD people. I can gain weight on 900 calories a day -- with exercise. I had gastric bypass and experienced two years of bliss as a "normal" person. But then catastrophic events caused me to turn mindlessly to my drug of choice, food. No excuses -- it is my fault. Egad, didn't mean to holler from my soapbox so much! You see, it's a GOOD poem that can get me all riled up.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

UR making me hungry. :-) This is very clever and a fun read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Yep know that feeling well, love it CRZ :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


haha, cute, starving, and analytical

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on April 9, 2013
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Tags: food, life, crave, analogy

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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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