Food,mhm.

There's a different type of food I'm talking about guys aha

Eyes are low , eyes are dilated

I ate only 6 hrs ago

Yes, my mood is agitated

2 more hrs passed

Stomach is churning

Tongue is turning

The images in my head are vivid and full of horror 

Because 

The pie of pizza is burning 

My appetite wish it was

learning 

The sweetness and icy of this cake

But is time to wake 

UP 

cause I was stuck in my mind

full of craves and emptiness

I guess this is how I feel about the world and food 

I've missed.

Reviews

[annie lee]

Sounds like a diet. When genetics have so much to do with body shape, size and metabolism, I am rather annoyed that science's only answer for us is: "ok, fatso, you're on a diet." What a myopic and punitive discipline for folks who are already suffering from low self-esteem, skewed body image thoughts, crippling social anxiety and the concrete feeling that it is indeed because they are BAD people. I can gain weight on 900 calories a day -- with exercise. I had gastric bypass and experienced two years of bliss as a "normal" person. But then catastrophic events caused me to turn mindlessly to my drug of choice, food. No excuses -- it is my fault. Egad, didn't mean to holler from my soapbox so much! You see, it's a GOOD poem that can get me all riled up.

[Perkele.7885]

I do not like to assume but, it does not sound like it is food that our protagonist is craving. He's thinking about how long it will be before the next time 'he eats' or takes his next dose of whatever it is that tends to make him happy. His last line says it all! I guess this is how I feel about the world and food I've missed.

[Prritiy]

depriving ourselves of anything makes us crave for more, be it food or...whatever...

best wishes

[Aristede Craig Jr]

I want some pizza now, lol

[Rose of many colours]

Not bad this is food for thought.

[Calibaster]

That's really good! I liked the rhythm.

[Astro]

Like all things we crave, moderation is the best policy. This was an interesting write with some descriptions that made even my stomach growl.

[Mike Emil]

yes
grab hold of the world and bite it
before it bites you
HAI!!!

[ayosonolowo]

Nice one crj, i really like this

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
Since I had my gall bladder surgery years ago, I was put on a medication called, "Colestipol." It is ONE mega-appetite suppressant let me tell ya. For anyone who is not having Fibromyalgia or anything, I highly recommend it. I'm taking 1000mg daily now.

I only think about food when I'm hungry now, which is not very often.

[Heather]

nice poem :)...... very thought provoking, good job!