rebirth

Deep thoughts come from unlikely places

Just like a dove with snow white wings
I wonder what the next storm brings
Life from above is the same from below
the beauty of a song that's never known
It will be that way even when your grown
But both young and old have never been told
What it takes to hold onto love unlike gold
friends new and old have seen
what love gone cold would do
to some "I love you " are just words said
To others they mean forever with no end
to me they have a greater meaning
that I can't just say them without feeling
anyone that can do that can be left to their dealings
but I've always believed love is more than a greeting
no matter how fleeting the reasoning.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think critics are welcome

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

I like this, flows well and good message.
Life is short, love is all around, cherish it.
Regardless of its form.

[Jamestown]

Friend, you are really good, perfect flow and message comes across crystal
clear, do work!!!!