CleansingA Poem by puppy74717A poem that I wrote for my cousin by request on May 12 of 2008. where it says "The lightning flashes/and the thunder clashes" clashes is a change from the original text. The friend who pointed this out said it sounded better than the original "cracks".I see a flicker of light at first it gave me quite a fright I hear the rain on the roof so I decide to close the book.
I open the door that faces the shore to see that it's merely, just a storm.
I step outside to sit in the rain in a swing, hung by a chain.
The lightning flashes and the thunder clashes as the rain pours down on me I feel as my sins are gone; I'm free. © 2008 puppy74717Reviews
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3 Reviews Added on November 4, 2008 Last Updated on November 5, 2008 Authorpuppy74717hot springs, ARAbouti'm currently a jr in high school looking to become a band director but write in my spare time... *gasp* did i actually say free time? i did! that's something i haven't had a lot of here lately more..Writing
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