You Are Not My Universe

The entire universe

Does not revolve

Around you

 

Saturn’s rings

Do not balance

On your every word

 

The sun does not eclipse

Just because you

Are feeling ill

 

Stars will not lose

Their light

Even if you do

 

Black clouds would not form

Even if your opinion

Is not accepted by all

 

The constellations

Would not scramble

If you are depressed

 

Comets do not lose their tales

Just because you suddenly

Lack ambition

 

The moon’s craters

Will not smooth out

To pacify your bad mood

 

The Earth will still

Rotate on its axis

Long after you are gone

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Yvonne Heidt]

Wow this is direct enough to sit up and pay attention! This stuff won't happen? Are you sure? I thought it was all wired to my fanny! LOL = It sure puts things into perspective doesn't it? Great job.

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

This is amazing! Wickedly Awesome Crystal! It's pretty morbid coming from my Wickedly awesome God-Mother, but it's excellent! I love it! I feel this way about people all the time (and I'm sure those people feel the same way about me). Truely Brilliant! Love Ya! =]

[Glen Madigan]

Hmm, you have written well, keep up the great work

[Brianna Brie]

The moon's craters
Will not smooth out
To pacify your bad mood

Wow every verse is creative. What an original idea...not only the subject but the metaphor and so true. Impressed!