"Blue"

"Blue"

A Poem by Cryingkate

The Color  today
will not be blue
Just too much, I say
Of living to do

Soon this ole' body
With no more to do
Be lifeless, by Goddy
With lips,cold and Blue

© 2016 Cryingkate


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must dissent my darling! not enough blue for me these days ..all grey ..spitting..raining...hazing ..aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh! ;)
seriously dear! .... i actually do agree...take the day as we have them ... soon enough lips of blue ... maybe more kissing will keep things pink eh!? :)))) really enjoyed reading ... nice one girl!
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

i think naked salamander hunting ... catch and release of course! :)
Cryingkate

8 Years Ago

I can only visualize you coming up with a big fat snake..... This where i quit. I'm going to hunt do.. read more
Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

:) .................



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Hey, no fair, can't have blue lips yet, or be cold.. you promised me a hike in the woods, teach me about rabbits and stuff.. er.. wait that was a hike with you and a "hare" off... but still there was no "blue" involved, except for that light blue sky with some puffy clouds... do I need to come and give you poetic CPR and wrap you in blankets.. ;0)

redzone

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cryingkate

8 Years Ago

Poetic CPR ? LMBO.. Your so wonderfully creative.... You made a sunny day out of this drizzling rain.. read more
redzone

8 Years Ago

Every now and then I am good for something... how does that song go, I can turn a gray sky blue... ;.. read more
love love love this! so simple but elegant Well done:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Good thing I wore green today. :) Hoping the second verse is a long time coming.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cryingkate

8 Years Ago

Green? I hope you have this outfit washed within 6 days from now :-) Yeah I think the second verse i.. read more

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Cryingkate

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