Assumptions

Assumptions

A Poem by crybabykylie

Shaky knees crumbling under your expectations of me

Fumbling fingers fill with soft flesh

The contrast between us is so

Bitter

and

Sweet

Nothing similar.

Only differences.

Careful conversation on what we are switch to harsh expression

Rusty hinges clunk, as you scowl toward me, slam the door.


Lust fills the empty space, bodies entangled together,

both aching for a love like screaming but not being heard.

Your arms wrap tightly around me,

Feels like a second skin,

For this moment, I feel safe.


“Lie to me.” I mumble in a soft whisper,

Tear rolling down my cheek.

“I love you.” he says.


© 2016 crybabykylie


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crybabykylie
just a poem of CW

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Nice poem expression word so nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


Makes you really think about whatś actually real nowadays, i like the ending but i feel like i´ve heard it before, like a cliche

Posted 8 Years Ago


That was really good, especially the ending, i love it. Um something to work on i guess is be more descriptive

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow......that was something i have few words to say cause it was amazing. The ending really hit me, it was very powerful

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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J.C
Woah, that was really good. The ending is really intense and strong. In my opinion, I feel like all you should try to do is take out a few unnecessary words. Ex: Line 3 - "is" instead add like a dash or something to give more impact on "so"

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOAH...THAT WAS POWERFUL...I cant think of any way to make that better cause its so good XD

Posted 8 Years Ago


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