chalk cheese spice of life -  debate via prose or poetry prompt - carl - mssouri & lisa carol - Co

chalk cheese spice of life - debate via prose or poetry prompt - carl - mssouri & lisa carol - Co

A Poem by carl
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First two stanzas for anyone who wants to finish and post it for both of us.

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Chalk, cheese, spice of life - debate via prose or poetry prompt - carl - mssouri & lisa carol - Co


Choice for spice of life 

presents a dilemma

pick chalk or cheese

one loser, one winner.


Roquefort or Whiz 

hopscotch or chalk lines

either would be

unkind death for me.


Is it the hunger for life

or life’s hunger

that provides

the spice to life?



 


© 2025 carl


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I feel this writing ends rather well as it is. However, to support your request here is my suggestion of lines to add at the end:

Is it the hunger for life
Or life’s hunger
That provides
Spice to life?

Posted 3 Days Ago


carl

3 Days Ago

thanks for you read and review - I am going to modify my lines and with your permission I will attem.. read more
LisaCarol

3 Days Ago

Absolutely. I enjoyed the poem.

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Added on March 31, 2025
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I am a retired English grammar and literature teacher, married, with five grown children. I enjoy reading science fiction, fantasy, biographies, and nonfiction history and philosophy. I have a BFA in .. more..

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