Here the analysis of thought is deep and colorfully worded in wonderful images and metaphor. This poem is philosophical and requires more than one read. I have several charred thoughts that rattle around in my mind and sometimes spontaneously reignite. A lovely poem
Thoughts can fill up a day for sure and I'm with you ..."the higher creative venture" is the only way, otherwise one gets stifled by the chaos of the universe...freedom to think is what we need depserately
NICE!
Warmly, B
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much appreciate the time to read and review - often my thoughts are like dreams bits and pieces of v.. read moremuch appreciate the time to read and review - often my thoughts are like dreams bits and pieces of various things that don't seem to link and make a train of thought just jumping around from place to place and person to person even to event - very disorganized and odd. I find that attempting poetry enables me to try and link things together in a creative environment and find or make an order out of my poor ransom brain. again thanks for the post -carl
Nicely done. I've been struggling with my own idea of two poets atop a mountain and just can't get it to flow as well as yours.
Impressively done Sir.
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thanks for the read and review much appreciated - I choose to deal with It in a rather abstract way .. read morethanks for the read and review much appreciated - I choose to deal with It in a rather abstract way but that's ofern how my brain runs anyway -carl
Words can be servants or masters.. but here you have calmly and creatively offered both.. perhaps because both heart and mind have joined forces with mutual respect, carl.
I tried to imagine a reclusive poet at the ascent under a rather confused internal assault looking a.. read moreI tried to imagine a reclusive poet at the ascent under a rather confused internal assault looking at the below through a lens of critical evaluation and self aggrandizement that made his external and internal perch of isolation so needful - lol -thanks for the read and review - carl
I am a retired English grammar and literature teacher, married, with five grown children. I enjoy reading science fiction, fantasy, biographies, and nonfiction history and philosophy. I have a BFA in .. more..