Esoteric Nonlinear Errata:

esoteric -for or likely to be understood by only a few nonlinear - not linear, sequential, or straightforward Errata - a list of errors or mistakes

When venture is begun

two captives very young 

no altar call mercy seat- 

a joyous garden replete. 

Palace path then started 

favored winds at the back

faulty guilt freely shared-

sorrow born without lack.

Here clearly spoken words

failed elicit cautious course

on precognitive real event-

before final veil cloth rent.

Where they built the tower

thereafter following flood 

planned heavenly ladder- 

instead got babble chatter. 

Minions gathered to stare

inviting Pythagoras best 

humming celestial sphere- 

harmonizing along as jest. 

Stragglers abandon town

fearing strong man's frown

lip syncing falsetto phrases- 

to castigate past strangers.

So continues gaming souls

holding cards against chest

waits unlucky dealer fade-

covets spots on last parade.

Fearful upcoming at night

solutions follow a premise  

expecting augment train-

safely at home come rest.

Author's Note

Where it all began to fall apart.

Reviews

[Soren]

Biblical indeed this bleeds with stories from Eden to the tower the renting of the veil. Nicely worded and presented my friend.

[carl]

thanks for the read - this is one of those that makes a little sense to me but didn't want to be clarified so I left it as it came, some sense some confusion just raw- carl