7 :

not all probably but all I could think of

7:

times seventy He said

very first day of rest

sneezes raise the dead

when dice roll is best

 

Hercules Cretan bull

days within a week

ladybug spots full

rainbow's color peek

 

stellar objects by eye

planet count of old

Big Dipper in night sky

fabled cities of gold

 

itchy years marriage bed

only neutrally ph water               

the holes in your head

Atlantis sunk ever after             

 

ancient world wonders

those old deadly sins

logic gate numbers

royal cubit of Egyptians

 

that famous son of son  

music notes you sing

seals of the Revelation

attributes of all things

 

Author's Note

just because I thought of it. was going to add "brides for the brothers" but seemed too trite even for me. lol

Reviews

[W. Barrett Munn]

This is a clever write and an interesting subject to think about. It reminds me of something I just watched about comedians which said comedians take everyday situations and shine a spotlight on them and cause us to laugh at oursleves. I think poets do the same thing only not for laughs - for commonality of greater things.

Winston

[carl]

thank you for the read and review, appreciate your insight into poetic purpose, be well -carl

[FGFRANKLIN]

I enjoyed this. There are so many repeating numbers in numerology; the numbers of power being 11, 22 and 33. The numbers 3, 7 and 13 are representative of; perfection (Pythagoras) for the number 3, The Book of Revelation talks about seven stars, seven trumpets, seven seals, seven angels, seven churches, and seven plagues. The number 7 is most often attributed to mankind although the Apocryphal book of Enoch mentions seven archangels; Michael, Raphael, Gabriel, Uriel, Sariel, Raguel, and Remiel. And the number 13 is representative of karma and fate. Because of this it was heavily used in the Great Seal of the United States when designed by the founding fathers...not only because there were thirteen colonies but because of its place in destiny as believed by freemasonry. Thomas Jefferson, George Washington and Ben Franklin were notable masons among the founding fathers. Also Christ had 12 apostles and He represents the 13th of the group. There's so much to be considered about numerology (particularly noted in the studies of Pythagoras) that a great many books have been written on the subject from the occult to mathematical axioms. A great write here on the number 7.

[carl]

thanks for the read and review, for me it was just a bit of a lark thinking of how many 7's I could come up with (none of which are original for sure)

[FGFRANKLIN]

Great job on the poem. I enjoyed it. Not everything has to be scrutinized under a microscope. I just have an analytical and eclectic approach. I read too much perhaps. (laughing) What can I say. I have a huge hunger and thirst for knowledge about everything. So much to learn, so little time. I place value on things unimportant to others. My dear friend (now deceased) was a brilliant intellectual and we had the best chats. She told me once, "Fabian, you are an encyclopedia of completely useless information." But that information which she deemed "useless" sparked many an interesting conversation between us. I'd rather watch shows on TV like NOVA on PBS or nature shows than what most people watch for entertainment. I've always been that way. I read Homer's Iliad and Odyssey at about age 12 and studied all the Greek and Roman mythology. Not because I was "smart" but because I wanted to expand my understanding of art, poetry, religion, philosophy etc. My favorite TV shows as a kid were Marlin Perkin's Mutual of Omaha's Wild Kingdom and The Undersea World of Jacque Cousteau. My 8 year old's favorite TV show today in Wild Kratts on PBS. I love seeing her get excited about learning new things. It's like I'm reliving my own childhood vicariously. She keeps me young at heart although I'm crowding in on that 7th decade mark much more quickly than I would like (smile)

[carl]

enjoy your conversations and your interesting in learning and it is exciting to see your children or grandchildre (in my case) be interested in things which will add to their understanding and enjoyment. My main source of creativity is clay and my granddaughter is in art camp this summer and they are doing clay so i am enjoying her experience. I read the Iliad as a young man and taught the Odyssey for two years to 9th grade students also Romeo and Juliet - it was a challenge to get and keep their interest and it required much explanation and repetition but I loved seeing a few become involved and interested and would actually read the assignments in advance of lecture. some of the best times I had as a teacher.

[carl]

I am a trained potter, but after earning my degree I taught high school English grammar and literature in a church sponsored school. when I retired from that I went back to college, refreshed my clay skills and have been doing clay for about the last 10 years, working in coop studios or from home. have slowed down a lot this last year, I think age is getting to me, can't bend over for long periods of time or I stay that way the rest of the night.

[FGFRANKLIN]

I sympathize greatly with the remarks on aging. More like physical empathy actually. My grandchildren from my oldest daughter are about the same age as my youngest. They live in Alaska. My son-in-law is a first sergeant in the army special forces. My oldest granddaughter has learned dog sled racing and even has her own sled dog now. She also loves creating but her favorite craft is the rigid heddle loom and she dyes her own wool, spins it and weaves scarves and other things. I'm so proud of her. My youngest daughter is an artist who sketches really well for an eight year old. She's quite impressive. I think it might be a genetic proclivity, this love of art. My sister-in-law, Becky, works in hand-building ceramics. Some of her pieces are really nice. She worked as finance director for a local college before her retirement. My brother (her husband) is a Vietnam veteran and he does a great deal of gardening. I grow a few flowers in a small plot but I like to see things grow. Becky took pottery classes after retiring but she's not a professional. I was just over viewing some of the works in your gallery. Fabulous work, just jaw dropping art. I loved it. My favorite was the piece that looked like a frog with its tongue extended. My oldest is a frog lover; her favorite animal. It's great chatting with you. My good friend "Dr. Dan" who passed away from throat cancer a few years ago was a professor of English at Lenoir-Rhyne University. He was also a wonderful artist and poet. I miss him and so many others I have lost. I'm sort of a homebody now just raising my little girl and I don't have the friends to talk to I once did. So I appreciate you bearing with my chattiness. We must have more conversations in the future in you are willing to and can find the time. I thoroughly enjoyed the chat. Plus, a man likes to talk to another man sometimes...I used to go over and chat with my neighbor but he passed away a little over a year ago. All my close friends from childhood are gone. It's depressing to think about too much. But I try to focus on the living of life and not the loss. I've got this beautiful little girl, my oldest, my grandchildren. I feel richly blessed just to still be around and tapping at my keyboard.

[FGFRANKLIN]

Oh, I loved the chess set and the newer works too. The newer pieces seem to have an Egyptian feel to them. Very nice work.

[carl]

will come back to this a little later, it's late here and passed my bed time. would love to chat, take care -carl

[Akinlolu]

This isn't only lyrical. It's definitely musical. I'll have to go over it severally to fully savour it. I'm a great fan of mythology and history. You've definitely masterfully sprinkled this verse with just enough dose to titilate. I love it.
Akinlolu

[carl]

thank you for your read and review much appreciate your encouraging comments. -carl

[E.P. Robles]

"Times seventy He said" is an exquisite work of art that delves into a myriad of themes and evokes a tapestry of vivid imagery. The poem's structure, consisting of well-crafted four-line stanzas, imbues it with a sense of symmetry and rhythm.

Let us now embark on a profound analysis of each stanza, exploring the poetic elements that make this piece truly captivating:

In the opening stanza, you introduce the concept of the "very first day of rest," a notion that resonates with creation and significant beginnings. The line "sneezes raise the dead" is a paradox that arrests the reader's imagination, portraying a potent and transformative force capable of breathing life and vitality into the most lifeless of situations. The concluding line, "when dice roll is best," introduces an element of chance and uncertainty, reminding us that sometimes unexpected events lead to the most favorable outcomes.

Moving to the second stanza, you skillfully interweave references from Greek mythology and nature. The mention of Hercules and the Cretan bull alludes to strength and heroic deeds. "Days within a week" hints at the importance of time and its inherent limitations. The imagery of "ladybug spots full" and "rainbow's color peek" awakens a sense of wonder and appreciation for the beauty present in the natural world.

The third stanza transports us to the realms of astronomy and ancient wisdom. The phrase "stellar objects by eye" captures an era when celestial observations were made without the aid of advanced technology, underscoring the curiosity and ingenuity of our ancestors. The inclusion of the Big Dipper in the night sky evokes a comforting familiarity, symbolizing navigation and guidance. The line "fabled cities of gold" tantalizingly hints at mythical places and legendary civilizations, igniting the reader's imagination.

The fourth stanza presents a thought-provoking interplay of contrasting ideas. The phrase "itchy years marriage bed" evokes the complexities and challenges of long-term relationships. The subsequent line, "only neutrally pH water," emphasizes the significance of balance and harmony in such unions. The metaphorical line "the holes in your head" lends itself to multiple interpretations, perhaps symbolizing gaps in understanding or a quest for enlightenment. The final line, "Atlantis sunk ever after," alludes to the enigmatic nature of history and the enduring allure of legendary tales.

The fifth stanza intertwines elements from ancient civilizations and intellectual pursuits. The mention of the wonders of the ancient world pays homage to human achievements and the relentless pursuit of greatness. The reference to the "old deadly sins" evokes contemplation of moral dilemmas and human fallibility. In contrast, the inclusion of "logic gate numbers" introduces a contemporary touch, highlighting the integration of technology and logical reasoning in our modern existence. The mention of the "royal cubit of Egyptians" sheds light on the fascinating systems of measurement and knowledge developed by ancient cultures.

Lastly, the sixth stanza masterfully weaves together diverse concepts and symbols. The phrase "that famous son of son" carries a weight of historical or mythical significance, emphasizing lineage and importance. The line "music notes you sing" celebrates the power of music to convey emotions and narratives. The evocative mention of "seals of the Revelation" conjures biblical imagery and mystical connotations, hinting at hidden truths and revelations. The concluding line, "attributes of all things," expands the stanza's scope, inviting contemplation of the interconnectedness and inherent qualities that permeate the world around us.

As a poet, I wholeheartedly commend your creative prowess and ability to seamlessly interlace complex concepts in a cohesive and engaging manner. "Times seventy He said" is a thought-provoking and imaginative masterpiece that resonates deeply with readers!

[carl]

Thank you so much for the read and review, It is fascinating the way you analyze the psyche behind the words that a poet has used. It is like a deep dive into the hidden and possibly unknown motivations that foster the choice of words and arrangement used by a writer. Reading you reviews is an enjoyable experience in deed. take care, sir.

[E.P. Robles]

I am pleasured you enjoyed!

[John the Baptist]

Yes, and in the seventh heaven, Muhammad looked upon the face of God.

[carl]

yes, thank you beyond my knowing but appreciated - carl