AFFRAID OF BEING ALONE

She is gone
Nowhere in sight

I ache her
She still stays gone

I scream COME BACK
She answers not

I whisper her name
No reply

I start to wonder
A voice speaks

Leave me pee
She flushes

Reviews

[Lexi]

Those last two lines really got to me :)

Argh, I think it was good up until the last two lines. They kind of threw me off.
I think you ought to take those two last lines and use them in a different write.

but that's just my opinion.