Secret

A sonnet

From your head to your toes, your nose and eyes
Everything about you is flawless
You don't know that I think you're such a prize
Somehow you've put my heart in a harness

I could never quite tell you how I felt
You are just too great, and I far too shy
All I know is that you make my heart melt
And I always dread when we say goodbye

Since I cannot love you as a lover
I would not mind loving you as a friend
Although your heart I'd like to discover
I will keep you in mine until the end

This is a secret never to be told
Just know when we speak, my heart you do mold

Author's Note

another original. All types of feedback is greatly appreciated

Reviews

[bro_stafari]

Beautiful crucita

[darrius]

Flawless, universal tone, speaks to all, yet one of a kind!

[Andrea Mouser]

I think this is a great poem. Keep writing