Mystery of Love

My mouth wipe opened, what did I see? I saw

an ANGEL. She is adorable, I mean
damn pretty. I must confess I haven't seen a
lady as perfect as she is. Her eyes, extremely
charming and beguile. Straight legs that comport
the way she walks, her manner of laughter could
make even LADY GAGA go *gaga* what can I do to
get her? Do you think giving her the whole world
will do? No! I don't think so,because I. have tried
it, it didn't work out...-> I can read her heart, even
its very glaring in her eyes all she wants is a
faithful, trust worthy, truthful and ever caring
man who will be there for her whenever and
wherever in this world. I'm everly ready to
dedicate
my time and everything to please and to pamper
her. Real gem like her are really scarce..her
heart is
nothing to toy with. BABY I want to you
to be the
mother of my kids, a wife to a darling
husband (me). Wouldn't you please take my
hand and be
mine?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Measured, and extremely well written. The character in the writing is finely imageried.

[Shittu Temitayo A.]

Actually its not a poem, to the best of my knowledge I don't know the category it falls; and moreover, the issue I used it to address is somehow complicated.

[VillainWisdom]

I thought it was exquisite, in reply to The Templar, Poetry is Art, and true Art doesn't follow rules and formalities, it creates it's own..search more for the message and not the errors.

[Marie]

I did find it interesting, though my preference is not fo romantic poetry.

[Shittu Temitayo A.]

Ma, I don't know maybe you can be of help. I have passion for short stories, though I haven't written any. I know with your God given talent you can always put me on the right track.

[Marie]

Well, you should start writing short stories. I have no real talent, but experience and skill; these you can develope.