Let's sigh with the night (Etheree)

I stumbled upon the etheree form yesterday, and fell in love at first sight! Image courtesy: http://oprisco.deviantart.com/art/words-of-love-128112523

Love,

Hold me

Pray, trace me

And embrace me

With your bluest eyes.

Let me gently grace you

And with my body praise you,

With hungry eyes as I face you-

Let’s sigh with the slowly melting night

And surrender ourselves to sweet surprise

Reviews

[Enigma]

Oh wow. Simply superb! I did not know about this form till now (and I bet it is a challenging one) but you aced it. The overall effect is so much more accentuated by the sheer simplicity of your style and the vivid images you create with your words. I loved it. :D

P.S. - And an equally beautiful picture.

[hayleeeey]

So short, but yet so powerful and moving. It flowed like a river.

[Patrick]

At first I thought Meredith from Gray's Anatomy was speaking...but grew to love the simplicity of this poem. The punctuation is spot on as well...tink i might try this style in the future. Great picture and font as well.

[AK]

Nice form of poetry, I really liked it! The flow was brilliant and so were the wordings. Great write!

[Nona]

stairway down to the deepest emotional crave bottom place! ace-ise-ace-ise! loved it! really well done!

[Sleeping Maiden]

I love this! It flows like a song. Beautiful picture to go along with your poetry. I love how it's full of love and just being with one another can give the most comfort. Great write! I adore it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and poetry. I like the flow of desire and the ending of hope and surprise. Love should flow soft and gently like in your words. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Archia]

That was quite really beautiful. This is the first etheree poem I've ever read, and I love it and you did a really good job at it. I love how you start with 'love' it just opens it up for the rest and stands there majestically at the top. I really enjoyed this poem.

[reflectingus]

Love the romantic mood of this poem. The picture completes the beauty of the scene you have created. The rhyme is flawless, it flows so easily, and I was blown away by the sweet, almost melodic words that just soar...Wonderful.

[Suditi]

Wow!
It flows like a melody!
The style, the flow, the rhyme, the content, all beautiful. :)