Vanishing Thoughts

Vanishing Thoughts

A Poem by Broken Hearts
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Just a quick haiku I tried to write.

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Driving the highway
With the music blasting
All my thoughts vanished

© 2017 Broken Hearts


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Broken Hearts
I appreciate all feedback. :)

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I find the opposite happens...my mind races to whole potential scenes and I lose all track of time on the way to wherever I go...time traveler. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Such a sweet Haiku, I've looked up some more writings on your profile and I can definitely tell you're really good at writing them. I'd love to see more haiku's from you in the future. Keep up the great work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Broken Hearts

7 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on March 21, 2017
Last Updated on March 21, 2017
Tags: Haiku, driving, music, thoughts, poetry

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Broken Hearts
Broken Hearts

Montrose, CO



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I'm a 16 year old writer/poet. I try to let myself be inspired by whatever or whoever is around me, so I’ll never know what I’m writing about till it’s done. more..

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