Longing in Her Eyes

You could still see it in her eyes,
Her longing for him to love her again,
To make the past memories a reality.

Reviews

[Gwenn the little girl]

Wow, such a short poem but contains so much emotions and yearning for past events. I especially am fond of the last line, of the longing the girl to replay the happy past on her sad present. The poem is simple but strong, but that makes it all the more heart-melting. :)

[Broken Hearts]

Thank you so much. Some good poems come from the heart-breaking pasts which make them so much more emotional.

[Gwenn the little girl]

I couldn't agree more :) Pain is one of the prominent feelings that drives us to write beautifully.

[Paul]

Beautifully written piece. This touches so many emotions in just a short time. I truly enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.

Paul

[Broken Hearts]

Thank you for your kind words!

[Paul]

My pleasure! :)