Reflection

Pantoum Form

How tender, the construct of her form
Delicate wonder, light captures shape
Vessel so strong, tempers her storm
Wandering daydreams, create her landscape

Delicate wonder, light captures shape
Insightful love, her sweet embrace
Wandering daydreams, create her landscape
Beautiful display, delivered in grace

Insightful love, her sweet embrace
Haunting eyes, undress my truth
Beautiful display, delivered in grace
Wrinkles of faith, gently smoothed

Haunting eyes, undress my truth

Vessel so strong, tempers her storm
Wrinkles of faith, gently smoothed
How tender, the construct of her form

Reviews

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This is wonderful, i love the flow. Amazing write.

[Kiri Nells]

Wonderful imagery and very engaging! Love it! Great write :)

[Patches I'm not so new..]

A well done pantoum you are, it seems to me to be a "strict construtionest" if I may borrow a political term.
The poem is one of wonderful imagey I really "got into it" as the saying goes
Too bad one cannot give a rating above 100