Like a Leaf

This piece was written during a time I was trying to figure out how to deal with life.

Like a leaf

I can bend and wave

 

Like a leaf

I can cover and shade

 

Like a leaf

I can wither and die

 

Like a leaf

I can learn to fly

Reviews

[Robin]

I like the haiku-like feel to this poem

[Samuel Dickens]

This sounds like an honest, introspective expression of thought, quite poetically expressed. I like it.

[nostal]

It's simple yet daring, and brave.
Great job.

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[deeps]

Il ike this, it has a certain imagery in it that makes it amazing. This is a very well written write here, beuatiful as well