To Whom It May Concern ...

I wrote this poem for a class in highschool. I really hated the kind of writer i was back then. However this poem was one of the ones I really liked and kept from those day..... I hope you like it

To whom it may concern
My smile hides it all
I hit the ground face first
Everytime I fall.
I try to pick up the pieces
And glue them back together
I'm not sure this feeling wont last forever.
To whom it may concern
I'm sorry for all the pain
I take a lot
With me there's nothing left to gain
Ill make you fall in love with me
And give me all you've got
A perfect illusion
I'm not quite who you thought
To whom it may concern
Sometimes its hard to breath
But ill pour my heart out to you
And still I'm hard to read
I don't understand
Its my one fatal flaw
To whom it may concern
Maybe That's why I hit so hard everytime i fall

Reviews

[Ashish]

This is something which connected to my heart..
You are an amazing writer Christina..
Just one thing I will suggest
If you start a paragraph when the line comes "to whom it may concern" then I think charm of the poem will be increased

Keep writing :)

[Cristina E. MCcombs]

Thank you fire your suggestion i completely understand what you are trying to say. When I wrote this down on paper I stood by it 100 % , however i knew something else could make it better. Your suggestion is exactly what was missing....
But I am very very thankful that you think I am an Amazing writer. It means a lot to me ... Your confidence in my writing makes me want to make my writing better than it currently is....
Much love and warm yellow light 💛 Cristina E . Ruiz -MCcombs

[Ashish]

I am glad that it helped u..
Keep writing :)