Love can...

Love can...

A Poem by Cristina E. MCcombs

I realize now love is unpredictable. Love can come in many forms.
Love can be a freckled faced, hair that has been kissed by the son, boy who calls you his inspiration.
But love can also be pressuring
Love can be broken
Love can be a low self esteem, wrist full of battle scars, to proud to show you shes bleeding girl who believes she's unlovabel.
Am i unlovable?
Love can teach us what our weaknesses are and love can smell fear.
Love has proven to me
Over
And over
That pain is very much real.
Love does not run, love does not hide, love demands to be felt.

© 2016 Cristina E. MCcombs


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This is a nice piece. I'm by no means a poem critic, but when love is the theme, always has my attention.

I agree with you that love is everything. We are on Earth to love. No matter what you can love. It could be anything. And time and time again it shows us its beauty and brutal cruelty.

But as we go, we become so much of what our foundation of love has shown us. We are all that and it's a risk I'm willing to take.

Love is everything. Cheers!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cristina E. MCcombs

8 Years Ago

Very beautifully writen.
I hope you enjoyed it.



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From the first line it had attracted me
"Love is unpredictable" so true
and the last line "that pan is very much real" had said the words of my heart

thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a nice piece. I'm by no means a poem critic, but when love is the theme, always has my attention.

I agree with you that love is everything. We are on Earth to love. No matter what you can love. It could be anything. And time and time again it shows us its beauty and brutal cruelty.

But as we go, we become so much of what our foundation of love has shown us. We are all that and it's a risk I'm willing to take.

Love is everything. Cheers!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cristina E. MCcombs

8 Years Ago

Very beautifully writen.
I hope you enjoyed it.
Your last line really reverberates in my mind. It leaves a lasting impression and will make this poem something to remember. Remarkable, keep writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cristina E. MCcombs

8 Years Ago

Omg thank you so much. This means a lot me
"Love demands to be felt"
Absolutely.. Love is all that and more... Beautifully written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cristina E. MCcombs

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much YumnaKay ... You have no idea how much that means to me
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Years Ago

You are welcome, Cristina! It was a pleasure.. No problem ☺

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Added on December 2, 2016
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Cristina E. MCcombs
Cristina E. MCcombs

Elizabeth, NJ



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Cristina E. MCcombs 20 years old From NJ Writing is my escape from reality and how i get through and handle my mental Illness. more..

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