War

There is this war inside me, 

and comfort is a hell of a drug .

it's everything i thought it would be 

and i find myself stuck .

they say misery loves company

and i taste it on your lips 

and it leaves me tongue twisted .

you leave nothing but your fingerprints 

there's destruction with each step you take ,

and you have a heavy foot 

you were my biggest mistake 

Mr.Misunderstood 

my light wasn't enough 

and my dark was to empty 

my skin to tough 

but still you took plenty 

there is this war inside me 

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Inner complications of a poet speaks through this poem... I think the poetic language was superb to describe the confusion of the mind...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Sami Khalil]

"my light wasn't enough
and my dark was to empty
my skin to tough
but still you took plenty
there is this war inside me"

A powerful write. I like the ending lines the most...:)..................

[Linda alexander]

Good write, poet having a crisis in poet's mind, vividly expressed , blaming another person called Mr. Misunderstood as the reason for the suffering