A Trace to the Past

it has been time that swept those feelings ago

occurrences, chances, moments i had but to let go

i hate how they came and hurled over me

tousled, flowered, then turned back to the old me

i had submitted myself to the promise of love

braved waves of hearsay and storms above

rejected opinions that might alter my vision

from other beloved and held on to passion

it was tough and rough that entwined with sweet

the ride i rode to the lover's deep

it was a clear view of pure joy and sheer bliss

that which in its back lay the dark, of shadowed abyss

i say i say, i've fallen into and out of love

into deep fantasy then back to life's ark

i say i proudly say, love had struck me an arrow

that which also pulled from a wound of deep sorrow

but this memory i shall never regret

aye i say, it was a point worth to forget

but the sweet shall mark a special trace

to that faded past i consider a grace. 

Author's Note

remember the first time you fell into... and out of love...

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Beautifully spoken and emotively expressed well...I loved flow...nicely done.

[crisler1227]

thanks for appreciating everett =) hope to write more...

[Everett DeValle]

You are very welcome...I did appreciate. :)

[Rose of many colours]

Well laid.. What poem can do to one's heart..

[crisler1227]

thank you so much...always inspired to write =)