cheater

cheater

A Poem by Crisco Prisco

looking at your picture i see the magic we had

looking back at the times i see why im mad

treating me like i was nothing

going on like i wasnt here

i treated you like you were my everything

you didnt even shed a tear

you didnt care

you dont matter anymore

so try to forget the times we had before

your the one that hurt me so stop trying to be the innocent one

you think all the times that we had were times that were fun

but most times you acted like i wasnt the only one

you lied to me and said there were no other hons

so dont play me like im a game

you and me will never be the same

so go away and leave me alone

your the one that has everything blown

maybe if you didnt lie or cheat everything would be fine

but you did and now i cant call you mine

instead of me you picked her

if that never happened i'd still be yours

© 2008 Crisco Prisco


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wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow.
sorry...it was just so good.

A lil advice i give to all new writers.

Today is tomorrow,
as tomorrow was yesterday.
What was yesterday,
this is what we shall find out through writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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i treated you like you were my everything
you didnt even shed a tear
you didnt care
you dont matter anymore
so try to forget the times we had before

I so love these lines, i like this emotional write well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow.
sorry...it was just so good.

A lil advice i give to all new writers.

Today is tomorrow,
as tomorrow was yesterday.
What was yesterday,
this is what we shall find out through writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it i take it you was hurt before by someone you really cared for but you good as i see im kinda new to

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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