Love

This is a love poem inspired by my beautiful fiance< who without, inspiration would be no more.

LOVE

Love is to savor,

Love is to share,

Love is to conquor,

Love is to care.

 

Listen to your heart,

Do so without fear,

We are destined to love,

All those we hold dear.

Author's Note

Please be completely honest, I am a dedicated writer looking for real feed back.

Reviews

[Lyn Murray]

It doesn't have to be convoluted to be good. This is clear, concise and to the point. I like it! As far as metering goes, go with your gut! Some of the most noted poets "ever" failed to follow the rules.

[JewelsGold]

I like it, seems quite short though, and the rhythmic rhyme scheme needs to be adjusted cuz it goes 5-4-5-4-, 5-5-6-5-, so that throws it off a little, but not a bad start, and perhaps you could write a little more on this love you have?
That would add more depth to this poem. Keep up the good work though, and submit more poems and enter contests here, join groups here and you will start to make friends and contacts, ok. Best of luck to you, Steve.

[crippledsteve]

Thanks alot Angel, I appreciate your review!!

[Angel Bird]

This is so beautiful in its essence and so true.

Great message! Well done. Just keep on writing...