Kisses

Kisses

A Poem by Crimson007

I'm a sucker for kisses
especially when they're scarce
and I never know how long I'll have to wait
until the next one comes along.

So when he grabs a fistful of hair
and prys my head away
from what I'm reading
I pay attention
and suddenly feel a pair
of sticky soft lips
press firmly against the corner of my mouth
accompanied by an 'mmmm'

A huge uncontrollable smile
forms on my lips
as I say, 'Thank you'
his eyes twinkle
silently saying I love you
and I selfishly ask for more

because I'm a sucker for kisses
even when they're
from a pizza face
snotty nose
little boy
because in the world of Autism
he just spoke a thousand
'I love you's'
with his sticky little lips

© 2008 Crimson007


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It's a touching poem, Amy. I only had one little problem with it, and I'm afraid to say it, because it concerns the whole point of the poem. No, I'm not going to say it, as I will appear insensitive, other than to say it weakens the whole effect that you were trying to achieve.



Posted 17 Years Ago


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It's a touching poem, Amy. I only had one little problem with it, and I'm afraid to say it, because it concerns the whole point of the poem. No, I'm not going to say it, as I will appear insensitive, other than to say it weakens the whole effect that you were trying to achieve.



Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

forgive me, but you're so easy...seconds, please...

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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What is really important to me, more than any bullshit...I wouldn't expect you to understand.. April is Autism Awareness Month, please donate to the cause if you can. .. more..

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