twisted string cheese and a heavy heart

twisted string cheese and a heavy heart

A Poem by Crystalbluepersuasion
"

just venting out frustration

"

spit out the change

gimme whats mine

 

i don't have the time for the crime

or the cryin

 

quit trying to run some game

let me explain

see- i'm to blame

 

all this pointing and clicking

has got me sick

i'm ready to run through

the streets with heart in hand

and mind in tow

 

so just go slow

i'm so not ready for a hand not steady

or the weak of heart

 

this is my rant

ive gone on and on

though no conclusion's been drawn

 

i still want whats mine

© 2008 Crystalbluepersuasion


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ohhh you know i liked it different a bit of confusion in parts but i think i understand it... decent write

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Crystalbluepersuasion
Crystalbluepersuasion

St. Petersburg, FL



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Well, I was born in VA, grew up in FL. Joined the Navy right outta high school- got the hell outta there as soon as I could. I am currently working toward my Masters degree in Mass Communications/Jour.. more..

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