Talking to Angels

Talking to Angels

A Poem by creativequill

His weathered skin a roadmap
Telling tales of his life
The sorrow filled old man
In final stages, with no strife
He's sitting in a nursing home
With visits on every other Sunday
Children and grandchildren
A one hour trip on the subway
They sit so impatient
Tapping their toes
Checking their watches
Listening to his stories, his woes
Of days long ago
The days of his youth
A small twinkle in his eye
While he speaks with excited truth
They couldn't be bothered to endure
Not a minute more of his routine tales
Not caring for a moment 
This is all he has available
They leave him alone
Abandoned again
And he sits and he stares
He whispers to a friend
He sits and he chatters
Of war and of peace
Of laughter and family
Of life and deceased 
They sit full of wonder
Of what's to happen next
They wish and they hope 
Onlookers are perplexed 
For this poor old man
Who's been left to his own
He sits there and he chats
To nobody, he's alone
He knows what they see
And how he must seem
To everyone else
He's living in dreams
But to an old man
Who's lived a long life
What's more beautiful
Than to chat with your angelic wife

© 2013 creativequill


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Beautifully composed words! Keep writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a sad story with a good message within the lines and written with great care and love...Well done and pen on...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

creativequill

11 Years Ago

thank you, glad you liked it
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I did...You are welcome...:)

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I'm 22. I believe in peace. And free expression. Art exists in everything and anything, some people just need to open their eyes. I think that the world in general needs to wake up. I believe in .. more..

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